Friday, February 25, 2022

Reminder about Comments

 This is just a friendly reminder from Professor Miller that I need for you to do two things in your comments on others' poetry. Even if you like the poem, we all know none of us are perfect. I know I certainly am not! So knowing that--and knowing that we are trying to help each other improve--I have asked everyone to leave at least one suggestion for improvement with your comment, however minor it might be. For example, you can simply point out a place that confused you a bit. That counts. You do not need to be harsh or spend a ton of time on every single poem. But I'm serious about this point, and I have mentioned it a few times, but it doesn't seem to be working. 

I know it is easier to praise, and you all seem like such wonderfully nice people. It might seem wrong to some of you to be even a little critical, but it's not. It is actually more kind and more generous to offer helpful suggestions. Praise is more valuable when it is balanced, and I know we all want to get better. So please begin offering at least one suggestion for improvement to most of your comments. I can only remind you so many times about this before I am forced to take it into account in terms of your grades. I don't want to have to do that. Plus every single poem we all write cannot be a complete work of genius. We all know that, I think.

The other thing I have asked is to use the vocabulary for poetry that we are learning in class--even if only a word or two in each comment. I know it might seem weird using words you have just learned, as opposed to ones you are comfortable and familiar with, but these words came into existence for a reason! They help us to communicate ideas about poetry more precisely and accurately. Once you use the vocabulary of poetry a little, it will start to feel more natural to you, and learning these terms will allow you to be more helpful to others. Thank you!

Tuesday, February 22, 2022

i mean

by Marcela Homsany

I mean like what are you
Like you know what I mean
where are you like from
No like where are you really from
I mean like what is your race
I mean you look Arab, like
I mean like how do you know Spanish
I mean like the world is big so who really knows who's what
I mean you must've like converted, right
I mean like you don't look Jewish
I mean like who are you to tell me I'm wrong
I mean I've never heard of anything like you before
I mean like are you mixed
I mean you aren't real like
I mean like you can't be real
Because like it's hard to hate a person as much I do now
I mean I'm not like antisemitic
But like how are you Jewish, Arab, and Hispanic
I mean I'm like not racist
But like can you teach me Spanish
I mean I'm not saying you look like an Arab but like
Free Palestine
I mean like isn't that contradictory
I mean like you aren't pro-Hamas
I mean like wait that doesn't make sense
Like aren't you Arab
I mean aren't you like disgusted with yourself
I mean like where do you fit than
Wait, so you're like a zionist
but like how
I mean you also like must know how to dance
Like I mean your food must be bomb
oops I didn't mean like bomb bomb
I mean
Wait, so like you're telling me you've never had bacon before?

Tuesday, February 15, 2022

Don't Forget Your Comments on Others' Poems

 Please don't forget to comment upon each other's poems! It's extremely important to the class (including to your grade), and so far, almost no one is commenting. So let's get on it! Links to the other student's blogs are on the right side of this web page.

Also, please bookmark this website, so you can easily find it in the future.

Sunday, February 6, 2022

Naming this Blog!


We need a name for this blog! This will be our overall poetry blog for the class. We will use this space mainly to publish the best poems from workshop, but you can also find links to all of the other class blogs here, as well as notifications about the class. For now, we need to come up with a name, and I would love it if everyone could leave a suggestion or two in the comments section for this post. We will vote for our favorite name soon in class!

So far, I have the following: Poetry from a Pandemic, Lyrics on Lexington, The Manhattan Ferry, Stern Poets Society, A Winter Anthology, Yeshiva Verses

Welcome to Our Class Blog

 This is the first version of the blog we've been discussing in class. I've chosen this theme for now and customized it from the preset option. We can change the appearance of the blog to suit our collective tastes later at some point. We also need to come up with a name. I've included links on the sidebar to each of your respective blogs and grouped you in the groups we assigned on Monday.


I need for you to do two things: First, please find your blog listing, and click on the link to make sure it works. Second, please create a link to this blog at your blog by adding a gadget to your sidebar. If you have trouble, I will show everyone in class how to do this. There's no hurry on this.

Note that you can always go here to find out what poems are up for workshop next. As soon as they have been chosen, I will list the author and title in the section on the right, labeled "Poets Up Next."

Email me if you have any problems or suggestions for the site. This is a work in progress!